Deserted. An official call out

[hyoujin]

Essay Grade: B-

Comments:

Pros: Strong overall thesis. Clean conclusion referencing summary statement.

Cons: Bullshit intro. Some minor grammatical issues.

Other thoughts: This essay received an entire letter grade drop for one simple reason: I was referenced in the same line with an unnamed food product commonly consumed by Mexicans and tupapa. In addition, your reference of "new/semi-new" can be debatable while the statement "up-and-coming" is an absolute insult to the likes of this active affable professional. Continuation of this SHARP disregard for a SHARP will be seen as the end of the sharp rock and a resulting FAIL for the remainder of the course.